you’re nameless
: a spark never stifled:
and you’re called after
and you’re rang for
and you’re yelled at
hung and mauled
for someone else’s sins
(yet you: sinless!)
you: my chain ring
unwrought
a redhot horseshoe
on wild stalion untamed
you: a harness
for every filthy word spoken
yielding your fire
to wretched and heroes
to kins and wanderers
to loons and wickeds
but only I know
your colours true
when blooming
when taunting
when wilting
you: a poppy
of colour deprived
and when you lay
your hair unbraid
spread open
bringing dreams
to life
only I know
your true song
: my dear lovechild.
i would love to hear this one narrated esp…one of my favorite pieces from you..
Thank you Shehz! I’d love that, too.
its just so visual and audible to me..its like i can see and hear the spectrum of emotions in this piece every time i read it..a narration with a good background score perhaps performed by a Shakespearean trained actress would be incredible..i can just imagine it..my flatmate and i are starting on a audio book with some of my poems with composed background music..(experimental)i want to add this to the list and have u narrate it and send it to me so we can work on it..this goes for the last refugee as well which would have to be a collaborated recording somehow 😛
That’s a great idea! You have my thumbs up 🙂 And I really need to get seriously on recording my part of “The Last Refugee”
once we start recording one or two and get used to it, ill start working on the last refugee and ash mary…might be a while cause he just getting his home studio together now
and we will start of with my ballad,then another one written by him and me…if those turn out good then i will move onto the the mentioned pieces..u know what a pain i can be as a perfectionist 😛